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Discussion in 'Visualizing Novels' started by YonYonYon, Oct 23, 2012.

  1. Eboby Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    If he did that makes him twice as beastly and I must crawl into the game and romance him.
  2. Madar Foxfire Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    I don't think the universe could hold that much creepy yandere-type in one place. It'd implode or something.

    YOU MAD FOOL, YOU'LL DOOM US ALL~!
  3. Jacquelle Hatoful Pigeon

    Back to the not-horrifying discussion, I am the dan-est of deres. I can't even look people I don't know in the eye, but once I get to know you I will never shut up. Yes, this forum is proof of that. :D

    "Hey, baby, are we in an otome game, because I think I'm on your route."
  4. Eboby Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    I DID IT FOR LOVE.
  5. IchigoNeko Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    AHAHAHA I NEED TO USE THAT LINE

    --in my non-existent dating life. Riiight.

    (it's a good line though~)

    ...so, Eboby, what's your toleration for crap pick-up lines? xDD
  6. Shelby Darlene Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    I'm like that. I'm extremely shy around people I don't know, but if I'm close, I'm always there very friendly and open. :3
  7. Sarasha Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Do you really want to know?
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  8. Madar Foxfire Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    The answer to questions like this is inevitably the same.

    Yes, but I wish I didn't.
  9. Randissimo Hatoful Pigeon

    OtomeGamer, you can't date me, I have no romance route!

    I do, however, have a bromance route, so if you're okay with that then it's all good.
  10. Eboby Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Dating is not one of those things I ever waste spend energy thinking about, but if you want to get dinner and see what happens, OtomeGamer, I'll come out to play.~

    IchigoNeko, as long as it's not neggging I think crappy pick-up lines are fun! You can go back and forth with someone for a good while just saying cheesy things. And if I'm the one who says one first, the dorkier the better. For instance, "Hey baby, want to help me complete my Pokédex?" worked so well for me a little while ago that I had to explain that I was joking to the person I'd said it to. I don't know what she thought I meant by that, but she was srs bsns thinking we were gunna do stuff and aaaaaaaaaaaaa nope nope nope. Eboby does not do touching.
  11. Sarasha Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Well I won't go into too much detail because plot but basically...
  12. YonYonYon Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Okay, after a very long delay...I did well with my midterms by the way

    We stopped when Makoto was telling us something about Zenya.

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    Makoto: I remembered about Zenya because of "Sunset".

    ~Tell us more~

    Makoto: Yaknow, there are some rumors about "Sunset" and Zenya. Did you hear them?

    ~Nope we didn't, tell us!~

    Yohji: Rumors?

    ~See?~

    Makoto: "Sunset" means that it's 5 pm now, right? People say, that after that Zenya is nowhere to find.
    Yohji: He's disappearing?..

    Yohji didn't understand. Makoto kept eating with elated smile.

    Makoto: I mean, seemingly Okinaga just brawled nearby, and as soon as the clock struck five - he immediately disappears without a trace.
    Yohji: ...Did you see it?

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    Makoto: Nope, I didn't see it myself. But our classmates say that he disappear everyday at 5 pm like a ghost, what a creepy guy.

    ~Remember this well, guys, Zenya disappear everyday at 5 pm. Repeated so many times information can not be unimportant. Right?~

    Makoto: There's more!

    ~More repeating?~

    -One boy saw Zenya staggering and followed him to the empty class. After that he heard painful groaning from supposedly closed room. The boy wanted to run away in fright but something touched his neck. Something cold. The boy turned around and saw... a bloody hand!-

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    Dang! I've just started playing! So, how Yohji will react to Makoto's ridiculous story?
    I'll be back in 10 minutes.
  13. Eboby Already Beat BF's New Expansion

  14. YonYonYon Already Beat BF's New Expansion

  15. Sarasha Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    A red choice every once in a while can't hurt, right? Let's find out! Red.
  16. YonYonYon Already Beat BF's New Expansion

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    Yohji: Does this have anything to do with Okinaga?

    ~So "RED" means "being a bitch to your only friend"?~

    Makoto awkwardly laughed and scratched his head.
    Makoto: Well, nope, but that time coincides with the disappearance of Okinaga, right? Right?
    Yohji: -sigh-

    ~Don't worry, Yohji. It's good to restrain Makoto from time to time. But it's still disappointing~

    Believability of the story immediately disappeared.
    Makoto: But someone reaaaally saw Okinaga trembling and moaning.
    Yohji: Oh reealy...
    Makoto: Howbeit, it is best not to mess with him.
    Yohji: He recently spoke with me.
    Makoto: Eh?! Really?! Noway! WHY?!
    Yohji: Who knows. It seems that he remember me from opening ceremony.

    -a little bit of chit-chat-

    Makoto: He's creepy. Speaking of creepy, that Shironuma guy is creepy too.

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    Shironuma Tetsuo.
    Yohji remembered his cold eyes.

    Makoto: Nobody knows what is he thinking about. He looks like a robot, right?
    Yohji: Yeah... I think...

    Suddenly Yohji remembered that strange aroma from Shironuma.

    -Another chit-chat about Yohji not eating well-

    Makoto: Aaah, I want to buy new sneakers.

    Makoto suddenly changed the subject.

    Yohji: What about yours - they look new to me.
    Makoto: They're new, but I found another pair which I want to buy. I need to expand my work hours...

    ~You... you're really easygoing darling of fortune, right, Makoto? e__e~

    Yohji: Can you?
    Makoto: Nope. It's impossible. But I want these snickers... Yohji~ buy me them!
    Yohji: No.
    Makoto: So fast! Well, I was joking anyway.


    And then they decided to go home.
  17. Umazes Hatoful Pigeon

    Location:
    Canada
    .../sobs

    As if this game didn't scare me enough already.
  18. Sarasha Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Well now I feel bad. Sorry Makoto, it wasn't Yohji's fault. Why do I keep wanting to type Yogi instead of Yohji? Inner child, are you messing with me again? This is not a good thread for you to be reading...

    Edit: Do you need a hug, Umazes?
  19. Shelby Darlene Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    I'm still not seeing what is so scary about this game XD It seems fine to me. Sure, the tongue thing was a bit odd, but it wasn't that bad.
  20. Eboby Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    If red makes Yohji a huge jerk every single time I'm going to have to vote for it more often.
  21. Umazes Hatoful Pigeon

    Location:
    Canada
    I just feel uneasy, and that uneasy feeling is worse to me than knowing outright that something bad is going to happen. And the more nothing happens, the more uneasy I get. It's a horrible cycle of nervous anticipation.
  22. Shii Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Location:
    Argentina
    Honestly the only really unsettling thing for me so far is the permanent darkness of the game.
    As in, the images having that 'lights went out in the middle of the day' look to them. It's disturbing.
    Well that and the whole Yohji getting nauseas part because the fuck was that.
  23. YonYonYon Already Beat BF's New Expansion

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    Yohji: Thanks you for good work, good bye.

    Yohji finished his work as a cashier in the food store.

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    Quiet night air wrapped around Yohji outside the store where he worked.
    By working in this store, Yohji is covering his living expenses. He come here right after school and work until 10 pm.

    He hadn't been there for a very long time because of illness, but the manager treated him with understanding.
    The manager was sharp, but a good man. He was worried about the health of Yohji. And Yohji was grateful for it. He planned to work at the store until the end of school.

    Today after the work Yohji went home. It takes only 15 minutes.

    The food store was surrounded by living houses so there was nobody on the street at this time. Flickering streetlight only emphasized the loneliness of the empty road.

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    Stepping on shabby asphalt, Yohji walked along the street lights.
    His mind was clouded with thoughts of sleep, but suddenly he felt a presence behind him.

    ~crap~

    He did not hear steps, but there was something there, in the dark. He was sure.

    ~crap~

    Although the street was deserted, it was not surprising to meet a belated passer.







    With that hope Yohji turned back.



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    But...








    There was no one.
    Only darkness and nighttime calm.

    Yohji: ...

    Maybe it was his imagination. Yohji is almost asleep, he might mistook something. When a person is between dream and reality, any shadow may seem strange creature.








    But...
    Why did he shivered?


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    Yohji hurried home.





    ...And still felt a presence.
    Besides, it wasn't one person. It seemed that there are many.

    ~crap~


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    Yohji turned back again.



    But there still was no one...



    The road was lit by lanterns, but, however, darkness enveloped everything.
    The bad feeling crept into the soul, and Yohji quickened his step.


    He heard a grinding sound behind him.
    He reminded the rustle of leaves underfoot.


    But on the road, there was nothing that could rustle.


    Yohji:...?

    Overlapping dry sounds, there was another one. Very unpleasant.
    Distinct sound that causes physical revulsion.





    As if slowly milled raw meat.

    ~craaaap~

    Yohji: Augh!..

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    No longer maintaining it, Yohji ran.
    He is not mistaken. There was something with him.

    And it was close.

    You could not rely on the light of street lamps.
    The eyes have become accustomed to the light and in the dark it was impossible to see anything.

    Something haunted Yohji.

    ~;_;~

    To run! Faster! While it is not caught up.

    But what was chasing him?



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    ~WE'RE SAAAAFE! Yohji locked the door. Good boy.~

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    Breathless from running, Yohji went into the kitchen and drank a glass of water.

    Yohji: Ahhh...*gulp* *gulp*...ahh...

    Yohji put the glass on the table and wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. Finally started to calm down, he slowly sighed.
    But what was that? An auditory hallucination?

    No it was something real...

    And something unreal.

    Trembling, Yohji went to his room...

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    Just today he had heard horror stories from Makoto.
    Not something to believe in, but after these stories it became eerie.

    They say the ghosts come to those who talk about them.

    No way, It's all nonsense!
    He's just tired...
    After good bath he will be fine.

    ~yeah, sure~

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    Usually Yohji takes a shower, but today it will be a bath. Sister has told him, that hot water can remove fatigue.

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    He sweated in the enveloping steam. The blurred mirror reflects his blurred figure.
    A bright red scar runs through his left breast.

    ~What?!~

    The scar he received as a child - in the accident that killed their parents.

    It has been many years, but he still found it difficult to look at the scar.
    Avoiding looking in the mirror, he climbed into the tub.

    The tips of his fingers touched the hot water.
    He sank lower and lower, until he fell into the tub on his shoulders. Hot water pleasantly caressed the body.

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    Removing hair from the face, Yohji looked at the ceiling.

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    He recalled todays events.

    But then the image of one person appeared before his eyes.

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    Tetsuo.
    ~nope!~

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    Yohji cleaned garbage with him.
    And when he tied the bag, something touched his neck.
    ~nopenopenope~

    Yohji: ...
    Yohji put his hand to his neck.

    At that moment he thought that this can not be... but still.

    Tetsuo touched this place. Why?

    While he was thinking about it, he felt something strange by fingers.
    Wet and slippery.

    ~You're in the tub...~

    He was sitting in the tub, so it was natural that it was wet ...

    ~Yeah, as I said...~

    But still...

    ~What?~
    ~...~
    ~Oh god, what whith this thobbing sound?~

    Removing his hand from his neck, Yohji looked at her fingertips.

    Yohji: ...!

    He gasped.


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    On his fingers was a red liquid.

    Blood.
    Memories of what happened after school washed over him.
    Here it is - the reason for which Tetsuo touched his neck.

    Did he see.. that?

    At the same moment Yohji's vision floated.
    Arms and toes were numb. Pulse quickened. He felt sharp pain with the pulse rythm.
    Yohji tried to stand up... but froze in shock.



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    The water turned red...


    Red...as a blood.

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    Yohji:...

    Yohji didn't believe his eyes and closed them.

    His body began to burn from within.

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    That's it! I'll wait untill tomorrow.
    Before that lemme ruin all the atmosphere
  24. videetcredere Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Okay, that description of the presence on the street got to me. Eurgh.

    I feel like the red option would be something insane like drinking the bloody water.
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  25. YonYonYon Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    I don't know. I went with blue in my last play
  26. videetcredere Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Yeah, I have no idea how to do any of this.

    I'm sort of tempted to find this and barrel through it with no idea what is going on with only the visuals to guide me.
  27. Eboby Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Red dead rum red~

    Drink the bath water Yohji.
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  28. sa_crystro_drina Armchair Designer

    Yes! Update get!
    dgLDc.gif
    Anyways, red wasn't too bad last time, so let's go with it.
    What's that no it's totally not because I want to see him drink the bathwater or anything
    You guys and your suggestions
  29. Candied Citrus Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Location:
    Scotland
    O_O

    Nuuuu~ D: Blue please! ;~;
  30. Randissimo Hatoful Pigeon

    Welp guys, it's been nice running with you guys, but after that red option, I think I'm just. Going to leave. I have a bad feeling. Sobs.
  31. Madar Foxfire Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Is it just me or does the blue corner seem a bit larger? All those choices to not french kiss dudes with bloody faces earlier, I suppose.
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  32. Shelby Darlene Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Look how pretty he is~

    Also,
    VOTE :D
  33. Sarasha Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    What the hey, let's go with red again! At least Makoto isn't here this time.

    That made me laugh. Does that make me a bad person?
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  34. Madar Foxfire Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    His stomach under the water kinda looks like the inside of Jabu-Jabu.

    EDIT

    Yes, but you are in good company.
  35. Shii Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Location:
    Argentina
    Last time we picked red, he was a jerk to his friend.
    There's no one to be a jerk to now, so this may mean he's gonna drown himself or something.
    Augh. Why am I being a good person right now
    Blue~
  36. Pandamonia Hivemind Coordinator

    Meh why not. Delurking because RED~! :D

    Besides, after blue giving us cut tongue guy I think we're gonna eventually die no matter which color we choose. o-o
  37. Eboby Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Welcome to the forum, bby.~

    Also, if Zenya is the one to kill us, I have no objections to all choices leading to death at this point.
  38. Sarasha Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Hello and welcome to the forum! Please enjoy your stay.
    So the vampires scare you but Zenya is a-ok?
  39. Eboby Already Beat BF's New Expansion

    Yes. Short answer is that he's a babe.

    Longer answer?

    We now return you to you're regularly scheduled nonsense. I hope Zenya likes licking things for no immediately obvious reason.
  40. Umazes Hatoful Pigeon

    Location:
    Canada
    Sobbbbbbbbbbbbbb
    Where is this going
    I wish I didn't want to know

    BLUE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, BLUE