Discussion in 'Dating/Otome - Broken OKCupid' started by Shelby Darlene, Mar 16, 2012.
Can I read it?
I-I mean, it's not like I'm interested in tied-up Lezette or anything.
Oh, and I just got Gardis' bad ending.
The feels. THE FEELS.
I am working on a fic for that. Because the pain.
Meanwhile, guys, help me, I ship Lezette/Kiriya there is no logic to this send help
Considering what I posted, I don't think I would be able to provide the type of help you're looking for, Randissimo :3
I know I need help, but I've never gotten past that stage.
M-Maybe...if I can work up the courage to actually post it > <. I've never written smut before (and this one is explicit and femdom, so might not be for everyone). I've seen how vicious people can get when they read fics they don't like...Example: The writer of My Immortal (Gah! I'm definitely not comparing my writing to this piece, but same principle) was pretty much a laughingstock...Granted, I can use spellcheck and words properly (for the most part), but...haven't posted anything of this nature ever.
I've always considered smut hard to write and it has proven that to be true.
tl; dr: Blame the Hetalia smut I read for encouraging to try my hand at writing this genre (that sounds wrong).
I understand. It's much embarrassing to let people read dirty stuff we write.
'Sides, ff.net usually doesn't allow reader-insert. I don't know anywhere that can approve it (luna and fosff seem like it has very stringent rules), so maybe I have to post it on livejournal or something. I think I had a fanfic posted on ff but for some reason it might have been taken down, because I can't see it anywhere on the site.
As soon as I think I'm good enough, I plan to take over several fandoms in ff.net with it. Dear readers, let me taint your mind with impossible shippings! Hohoho~
I think An Archive of Our Own is pretty lenient on the type of things you post up if you're looking for a fanfic site to host your stuff.
I DUN WANT HIM TO GO POOF!
“Huhuh, you put on a splendid show tonight… keep up the good work,” Gardis then says.
Glad that you think that. *throws shoe*
“Wait! Are you trying to run away!?” Chris yells at him.
“What…!?” Chris asks.
DON’T GO HUH! THROW YOUR SWORD AT HIM!
Poor best friend!
Chris then punches the floor and it cracks.
Damn, Chris! You are one strong protagonist!
Chris is struck by the change in his voice. For Lezette, shame is worse then death.
Aww… It’s alright… You were trying to protect Chris…
I wonder why…
There you go! Be strong, Chris! Don’t let something as simple as a death collar bring you down!
Lezette, did we not establish this? You can’t die! You’re a love interest!
You’re her knight and best friend!
“But…!” Lezette protests.
We are seriously playing the “IT’S ALL MY FAULT!” “NO, IT’S ALL MY FAULT!” game?
Yep, we are.
Thank you for stopping what could have been a very long argument over who caused what.
Umm…. Moons can smirk?
Ah, Gardis. *shakes head*
I just finished Jin's route.
*sniffle* I downloaded this game at it REFUSES TO WORK *sobs*
Thank you Shelby for playing this and letting me see what this beautiful game contains.
Apparently his route was written by a different person than the one who wrote Gardis's and Lezette's route, so I am not considering his route canon.
Did you change your Locale to Japan? It won't work otherwise.
I did! The game screen loaded and I can hear the BGM , but it was just a blank black screen.
Do your folders go from Second Reproduction -> Second Reproduction -> TSR Patch -> [English] The Second Reproduction.exe ? I think I had the same problem as you and moved the folder with the patch around until it worked.
I swear this will be updated when I get done with exams ><
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